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My first sfm


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Looks very nice for a beginner,the only problem i really see is the pyros pose.make him float a little bit more up and his legs spread a bit more to give it a cartoonish feeling.

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Came here expecting complete crap. Was pleasantly surprised.

Your render settings seem off, the angle is bad and the character's poses seem unnatural but it's not that bad, I have definitely seen worse, keep it up and I'm sure you will improve.

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If you literally just installed SFM, jumped right in and attempted to make something, then this is acceptable as a first try imo.

- It's quite blurry, try upping the resolution and adding some Anti-Aliasing.

- The Pyro's legs look somewhat broken.

- Textures are quite low quality as well.

3/10

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Looks a bit too g-mody imo.

Although I like gmod style sfm films, I just don't think it looks good in posters (especially those of high res)

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