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Looks nice, but not enough gardevoir. If you can get a gardevoir in one of those, then its a solid eleven

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Your pictures are good but the rendering is shit. Make the rendering options higher. Also, like Hazza said. Custom posing is 10x better!

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Your pictures are good but the rendering is shit. Make the rendering options higher. Also, like Hazza said. Custom posing is 10x better!

 

Better, but still needs 3 point lighting, and I would ramp up the aperture, but that's just my opinion.

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=365031186

^Guide for 3 point lighting^

Also, custom posing wouldn't hurt.

 

I took your advices and came up with this:

http://i.imgur.com/vpbJH64.jpg

 

Anything I can improve on?

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I took your advices and came up with this:

http://i.imgur.com/vpbJH64.jpg

 

Anything I can improve on?

Better.

The lighting is half-decent now, but still needs some work., for example some areas of Pyro's chest being much more illuminated than the rest.

The Aperture really needs to be turned up even more.

Ok custom posing, but Engi's right elbow clips into his hand, his left arm just looks inhuman somehow, and you didn't do anything with Pyro's right arm. Just a tip, and I know it sounds stupid, but stand up from your computer and do the pose yourself so you know what to do, if that makes any sense. Again, it sounds dumb, but it's good for beginners like yourself.

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