file.zip Posted November 23, 2014 Share Posted November 23, 2014 I just want some feedback on one of my first SFM posters. I want to know what to improve on, and what to do to make posters more exciting, and interesting. (Yes, I am working on unusual effects) My imgur: http://filedotzip.imgur.com/all/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Дебра Posted November 23, 2014 Share Posted November 23, 2014 I love the cartoony feel of the explosion. But seriously people stop it with the Michael Bay posters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ballistic Posted November 23, 2014 Share Posted November 23, 2014 It looks ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndersLofnes Posted November 23, 2014 Share Posted November 23, 2014 Looks cewl, idk about full tone map scale down... looks kinda cool but having it up a bit helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndersLofnes Posted November 23, 2014 Share Posted November 23, 2014 It looks ok. Yo btw I finished you poster you didn't comment, did you see? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mark Unread Posted November 23, 2014 Share Posted November 23, 2014 It looks fine to me, pal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
file.zip Posted November 23, 2014 Author Share Posted November 23, 2014 It looks fine to me, pal. It looks ok. I love the cartoony feel of the explosion. But seriously people stop it with the Michael Bay posters. Thanks, guys. I just finished another poster, so it is now in the thread. Thanks for the feedback. BTW michael bay is love michael bay is life michael bay is also bae Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin the Chicken God Posted November 23, 2014 Share Posted November 23, 2014 Thanks, guys. I just finished another poster, so it is now in the thread. Thanks for the feedback. BTW michael bay is love michael bay is life michael bay is also bae the scouts pose is really nice, I dont really know what the soldier is doing tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AndersLofnes Posted November 23, 2014 Share Posted November 23, 2014 Like this a lot, eyes? or is it deliberate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zcrab Posted November 23, 2014 Share Posted November 23, 2014 The first one is cool, but making a light on the charecter so you can see him much better would help alot. It doesn't need to be super bright, just enough so you can see more details, and colour the rim lights behind him so it looks like the explosion is actually giving of light. The second one could use more camera settings like FOV , to make it look more in depth and interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
file.zip Posted November 23, 2014 Author Share Posted November 23, 2014 the scouts pose is really nice, I dont really know what the soldier is doing tho He was shooting a rocket, but everytime I rendered it disappeared. I found out the file was corrupt, thats all I have of it. The scout's pose is actually the beginning of the "Battin a thousand" taunt, mixed with the hands up sequence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
file.zip Posted November 23, 2014 Author Share Posted November 23, 2014 The first one is cool, but making a light on the charecter so you can see him much better would help alot. It doesn't need to be super bright, just enough so you can see more details, and colour the rim lights behind him so it looks like the explosion is actually giving of light. The second one could use more camera settings like FOV , to make it look more in depth and interesting. Thanks! I'm, working on another SFM poster right now, I'll think about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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