velgis Posted October 31, 2019 Share Posted October 31, 2019 So I'm still pretty new to Source Filmmaker (as of now I've logged 12 hours?). Here's the two images I've done, if you're willing to take a look! Any and all constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated, since I'm just starting out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryan coke Posted October 31, 2019 Share Posted October 31, 2019 Good, average, generic, are the first words to pop into my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
velgis Posted October 31, 2019 Author Share Posted October 31, 2019 Just now, ryan coke said: Good, average, generic, are the first words to pop into my mind. Thank you for the feedback, I understand they're pretty basic so far. I'm looking into making better poses and more dynamic lighting for the next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heroic_Object Posted October 31, 2019 Share Posted October 31, 2019 For just starting these are really good. Simple yet clean. Keep at it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keks Posted October 31, 2019 Share Posted October 31, 2019 pretty nice lighting for a beginner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Norah Posted October 31, 2019 Share Posted October 31, 2019 Pretty slick! I know it's a weird thing to focus on, but I like the framing on these, nice shots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
velgis Posted October 31, 2019 Author Share Posted October 31, 2019 1 hour ago, Heroic_Object said: For just starting these are really good. Simple yet clean. Keep at it! 58 minutes ago, Keks said: pretty nice lighting for a beginner 33 minutes ago, Norah said: Pretty slick! I know it's a weird thing to focus on, but I like the framing on these, nice shots. Thanks for the positive feedback! I'll definitely do my best to keep it up, and do even better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captainfluffy Posted October 31, 2019 Share Posted October 31, 2019 Mainly i find the cosmetic choise for the solly abit to much, a simpler loadout would fit better cause its a eye sore right now, mabye a classiefied coif, mistaken november. Modest pile of scrap or hat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vAGUe Posted October 31, 2019 Share Posted October 31, 2019 Saying they're decent would be an understatement... It has good lighting, resolution/image quality, and I see the use of aperture and focal distance which are all a big thumbs up. IMO, adding particle effects would bring the posters more life and make it look more appealing overall. Maybe also doing post-edits in Photoshop would make it look better Other than that, keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slam Posted October 31, 2019 Share Posted October 31, 2019 They're great considering you're newer, but decent all-around, it probably won't take you long to make some seriously high quality stuff man. (You're doing far better than all the people on r/tf2 that post "my first sfm! :D" and it's a Fullbright image of a couple hatless characters in default/taunt poses) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
velgis Posted October 31, 2019 Author Share Posted October 31, 2019 5 hours ago, Captainfluffy said: Mainly i find the cosmetic choise for the solly abit to much, a simpler loadout would fit better cause its a eye sore right now, mabye a classiefied coif, mistaken november. Modest pile of scrap or hat 5 hours ago, vAGUe said: Saying they're decent would be an understatement... It has good lighting, resolution/image quality, and I see the use of aperture and focal distance which are all a big thumbs up. IMO, adding particle effects would bring the posters more life and make it look more appealing overall. Maybe also doing post-edits in Photoshop would make it look better Other than that, keep up the good work! 2 hours ago, mike_ers said: They're great considering you're newer, but decent all-around, it probably won't take you long to make some seriously high quality stuff man. (You're doing far better than all the people on r/tf2 that post "my first sfm! :D" and it's a Fullbright image of a couple hatless characters in default/taunt poses) Thank you again for the comments! The cosmetic choices are just people I find in public servers that caught my attention because they were fun to play with, haha! I'll try to play with particle effects more, and possibly more Photoshop editing (I really just painted over major clipping and drew some rimlights+increased the vibrance.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
velgis Posted November 2, 2019 Author Share Posted November 2, 2019 Tried to go for something a bit more dynamic; I'm not 100% sure but I liked working on it. (15 hours in SFM now! Wow!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
velgis Posted November 5, 2019 Author Share Posted November 5, 2019 Friend asked me for some renders for his upcoming RoA workshop submission, so I tried painting over a bit and really paying attention to lighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heroic_Object Posted November 7, 2019 Share Posted November 7, 2019 You're getting really good at an insane rate. Keep killing it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
velgis Posted November 8, 2019 Author Share Posted November 8, 2019 15 hours ago, Heroic_Object said: You're getting really good at an insane rate. Keep killing it! Thank you for the input! There was a rejected win-screen render that maybe I'll clean up at some point and post here too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
velgis Posted November 8, 2019 Author Share Posted November 8, 2019 Did a paintover of my supposed "god awful disgusting pyro". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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