Python. Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 I was finally able to upload it yesterday because my program has been acting like a bitch for the past month I'd really like some constructive feedback on my annunciation, the information given, and my pronunciation. Any I'm not hard on editing (as you can see) and I stumble a few times with my voice, but I get the word across Thanks~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The G What ™ Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Music is both annoying and distracting. It goes over your voice multiple times. You don't need to announce when you left and came back, just edit that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corillo Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 cool to see somebody actually making a video about this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Python. Posted February 2, 2014 Author Share Posted February 2, 2014 Music is both annoying and distracting. It goes over your voice multiple times. You don't need to announce when you left and came back, just edit that. Problem is, I can't cut out when I say "I'll be right back" a thousand times, as it screws up the audio, since the audio doesn't cut with the picture in the device I'm using to record (not buying shit) Also, I can't find where it goes over my voice once. Most of the time I can hear myself quite clearly I could probably re-upload with no music. Gotta make the annotations again, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex From Security Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Etcetera Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
✔ P I X E L A T E D ✔ Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Some things: - If "How2" is meant to be a series you should have a : after it, right now it looks like you half-assed the title . - You want to get fraps 100%, pirate it or buy it, its up to you. - People have already mentioned about the music being to loud, but to stop infringements, unless it is royalty free, I'd recommend Kevin Macloed ( incompectech.com ) - Sadly most people won't watch a video for longer then 4 minutes if its a guide, try to write out clear points and try to avoid context (leave that for the description) - You can save a lot of time by editing small cuts, like loading times, movie maker can do this, but if you really want to edit sound and video to the frame, get premiere. - If you want it to be viewed, use key words and make a decent, bright-coloured thumbnail. Or just get Brad to share it on the homepage Good work though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The G What ™ Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Some things: - If "How2" is meant to be a series you should have a : after it, right now it looks like you half-assed the title . - You want to get fraps 100%, pirate it or buy it, its up to you. - People have already mentioned about the music being to loud, but to stop infringements, unless it is royalty free, I'd recommend Kevin Macloed ( incompectech.com ) - Sadly most people won't watch a video for longer then 4 minutes if its a guide, try to write out clear points and try to avoid context (leave that for the description) - You can save a lot of time by editing small cuts, like loading times, movie maker can do this, but if you really want to edit sound and video to the frame, get premiere. - If you want it to be viewed, use key words and make a decent, bright-coloured thumbnail. Or just get Brad to share it on the homepage Good work though I meant to say that too. It's a good start to a video, and information that I am interested in, but I can't hear so much of what you're saying! Nice start though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Python. Posted February 2, 2014 Author Share Posted February 2, 2014 I meant to say that too. It's a good start to a video, and information that I am interested in, but I can't hear so much of what you're saying! Nice start though. I set it to silence, on my program, but it's just so boring. I couldn't really find where the song goes over my voice though I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to leave it in. Don't feel like re-creating all the annotations and such But I'll definitely use this advice in future videos though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jorisk322 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Nice video, but I fully agree with Pixelated. Music should probably be instrumental if you really need music. Most of Kevin Macleod's music is instrumental and I can definitely recommend that as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Bucket Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Some things: - If you want it to be viewed, use key words and make a decent, bright-coloured thumbnail. Or just get Brad to share it on the homepage Good work though You can't have custom thumbnails unless you are a partner I think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spu~ Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Brad pls put this on the front page as a guide. Tired of seeing terrible suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
✔ P I X E L A T E D ✔ Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 You can't have custom thumbnails unless you are a partner I think Yes, but there's no longer any requirements to be a partner, you just have to promise you won't get 3 copyright strikes etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Bucket Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Yes, but there's no longer any requirements to be a partner, you just have to promise you won't get 3 copyright strikes etc. Goes to show how committed I am to my channel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dixiecountry1971 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 U sound sexy, also u did a good enough job doing what u set out to do But bad choice for music imo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Python. Posted February 2, 2014 Author Share Posted February 2, 2014 U sound sexy, also u did a good enough job doing what u set out to do But bad choice for music imo Thanks for the compliment? And yeah, music choice, not the best. Not what I was concerning myself with while making the vid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Python. Posted February 4, 2014 Author Share Posted February 4, 2014 Hey. I'm currently uploading another video with the advice I have been given about this one There's no (annoying or loud) music, I don't stumble as much and I don't say "I'll be right back" I cut the length of the video to about 9 minutes and crammed it with as much info as possible The video is How to Decrease a Price of an Item on Backpack.tf When it's uploaded, I'll post it here for more feedback. Thanks~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Python. Posted February 4, 2014 Author Share Posted February 4, 2014 Here it is Hope it's better this time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Python. Posted February 4, 2014 Author Share Posted February 4, 2014 Brad pls put this on the front page as a guide. Tired of seeing terrible suggestions. I've actually gotten a lot of compliments in the comments about how helpful it was. Maybe it should be on the front page? Also here http://backpack.tf/vote/id/52f0280c4dd7b80d5e8b456b#52f043d84dd7b8be3d8b4567_row Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dabaers Posted February 4, 2014 Share Posted February 4, 2014 As a commentator, you need some work But it isn't really a commentary so its fine . The music in the first was a little annoying but the second was greatly improved. All what really matters was the information and I feel like it would be great for the new users Brad pls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewis The Key Posted February 4, 2014 Share Posted February 4, 2014 Great tutorial! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Python. Posted February 4, 2014 Author Share Posted February 4, 2014 My Title was changed ;( As a commentator, you need some work But it isn't really a commentary so its fine . The music in the first was a little annoying but the second was greatly improved. All what really matters was the information and I feel like it would be great for the new users Brad pls Yeah, I noted the music was annoying so I removed it in the 2nd. From what I've heard they've both been really helpful Exhibit A: Great tutorial! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Prince Posted February 4, 2014 Share Posted February 4, 2014 You make it sound really easy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roller Posted February 4, 2014 Share Posted February 4, 2014 How about the Backpack History of them two users? If the sale wasn't clear, I'm sure that is the best way to check. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Python. Posted February 4, 2014 Author Share Posted February 4, 2014 How about the Backpack History of them two users? If the sale wasn't clear, I'm sure that is the best way to check. I can add that in the description Edit: Did it You make it sound really easy. Can't tell if that's bad or good tbh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Prince Posted February 4, 2014 Share Posted February 4, 2014 I can add that in the description Edit: Did it Can't tell if that's bad or good tbh I use *sarcasm* if i use sarcasm. Its compliment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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